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What an amazing day it is! I got up when it was six o'clock yesterday. Than I rode bicycle to go to the park. When the time arrived 12 o'clock, I as well as my parents had lunch at McDonald's. In the afternoon both I and my classmates played basketball from four pm till six pm. after dinner, my father along with me went for a walk. At that time, I saw a CD about classical music, so my father bought it for me. What a fantasting day it is! fantasting