作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
What an amazing day it is! I got up when it was six o'clock yesterday. Than I rode bicycle to go to the park. When the time arrived 12 o'clock, I as well as my parents had lunch at McDonald's. In the afternoon both I and my classmates played basketball from four pm till six pm. after dinner, my father along with me went for a walk. At that time, I saw a CD about classical music, so my father bought it for me. What a great day it is!