初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；文章层次较为清晰。

Do you know who Yao Ming is??? He is a great basketball player who won lots of games. I have seen lots of Yao Ming's games during the summer holiday.And I want to be a basketball player who is like him. Basketball is my favorite sport. And Yao Ming is my favorite player. The passage I read said that he was as great as Kobe. But in fact.It was him teammates who helped him win every game. A teammate can't make a team at all only by himself. I like it because it's a teamwork. And it teaches me how to learn teamwork.