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An interesting day Sam got up at six o'clock. And then, He rode the bike to park, he had fun in the park. He had lunch with parents in the McDonald's. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball with his classmates in the school from four o'clock till six o'clock. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with father, father bought a classic music CD for him. What an interesting day!
