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Dear Sir: Thank you for the letter of January 26. About the exchange of goods last month, for avoiding the similar matters happen again, our produce, transportation and export managers have discussed and designed a specific form to run your business efficiently. Attachment is the form for the further order, including the column of specification, package requirement and instruction. I believe this would help us to offer better service for you and enhance our cooperation. If you have any modification or question about the form, please let me know. Best wishes