希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
Hello, My name is King Lucy. I am come from the UK. I am 13 year's old. I like china and I would like to know more about China. I want to find a Chinese girl as my pen pal. I hope she has the same hobbies as mine. My hobbies are sports, music, movies and so on. I also want to learn chinese from her.