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Our Monitor Our monitor is Xiao wang. I have been sit the same table with him for half of year. Xiao wang is 15 years old. He is tall and strong, he like to wear black or white clothes. He is very willing to help other classmates, if I have problems, he always help me to finish it. I will sit with him in next two and half of years until graduation.