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七年级英语下册Unit10 单元测试试卷作文附范文:My Busy Day

发布时间:2013-05-28 23:08浏览次数:1933
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以 "My Busy Day"为题描述你昨天的活动情况
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;从句数量稍显不足,注意增加从句和复杂句的使用;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。

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My Busy Day I am very busy yesterday. I got up at six o'clock and went out for exercise. I went back to home at seven o'clock and preparing for breakfast. After my son finished breakfast, I send him to school, after that I went to company. I had a lot of works need to handle. I had a meeting before noon. I need to bring customers visit our company yesterday afternoon, after that, I invited them to have dinner together. When I finished all my work, it was 9 o'clock.

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