单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用;语言不流畅。
Sam got up at six o'clock. Then he went to park by bicycle, he had a good time in the park. He had a dinner with his parents at McDonald's. In the afternoon Sam and his classmates played basketball in school from 4 to 6 PM. After evening dinner, Sam and his father went for a walk, and his father bought him a classes CD. What a good day for Sam.