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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；用词丰富，高级词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。
My hometown is Shanghai. It is the financial center of China. Shanghai's spring and autumn is short, the temperature is about 10 degree. This kind of weather is suitable for outdoor activities. People ususally go to park or playground for excercise. Shanghai'summer is hot, it is about 40 degree. People usually select to stay in the home or office. I go out for a walk at night. Although the temperture of Shanghai's winter is not lower than Northern cities，but it doesn't feel warmer than northern cities. There is not heating in Shsanghai, so people run air condiction. As in summer, people do not go out, most of time indoors.
