文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday .Then he go to the park by bike and enjoy the time .Sam had a lunch with his parents at McDonald.Sam played basketball from four o'clock till six o'clock with his classmates in afternoon.After dinner ,Sam went for a walk with his father and his father bought a classical CD for him.What a fun day.