七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；文中从句的数量太少；结构不严谨，行文不流畅。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday .Then he went to the park by bike and enjoy the time .Sam had lunch with his parents at McDonald.Sam played basketball from four o'clock to six o'clock with his classmates in afternoon.After dinner ,Sam went for a walk with his father and his father bought a classical CD for him.What a fun day.