文中较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇量仍需积累;文中从句数量过少;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
My Net Friend I can not remember who is my first net friend. QQ is my first chat software, I have been use it since 2001. It is 15 years so far. Initially, I chat with my friends or classmates via QQ, We also set up a group and chat inside. After 2006, I rarely use QQ. Some new social networking sites and chat tools appeared. Such as, kaixin,renren and Wechat. With the rapid development of internet technology, more new chat tools and features will appear.