初一英语作文模拟题:夏令营

句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

My summer camp The school organizes students to travel in other countries for summer camp. We are going to travel in Beijing this year. We are going to visit The Forbidden City, the Great Wall and Yuanmingyuan, we can learn more about history in these places. At the same time, we will visit the commercial center of Beijing, try some local snacks.