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sam is yesterday is very interestin! In yesterday morning, he gut up at 6 o'clock. Then buy bike go nature park, he can play at park, so he very happy! In noon, he with parent eat lunch in McDonald's. In Afternoon, he with hes classmate play basketball at school, from afternoon 4 o'clock till afternoon 6 o'clock. After dinner, sam with father go tor a walk, and father for he buy classical music CD. that day sam Live interestin very mach!