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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；从句使用量不足；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Sam gets up at six o'clock yesterday. And then go to the park by bike, he played happily in the park. At noon and parents eat lunch at McDonald's. afternoon Sam and his classmates to play basketball at school, from four pm until six pm. After dinner, Sam and his father walk, his father bought him a classical music CD. Sam had that day how fun ah!
