2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

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Should private car owners be taxed for pollution? Since China's reforming and opening up,life level has improved in China,Chinese are able to afford a private car as basic tranportation tool.It is great convenient for people to go out and come back,so i don't support tax pollution for car owners.The reason is the following. Firstly,rural and uraban transportation system is not well organized,for example there is no bus or subway in some places,or people have to take much time to wait bus because of bus' little departure frequency .this is very low efficiency for people. Secondly,Pollution tax on car owners will increase burden on people,Now cars are mostly boung by the young as wdding present,they who of some just graduated from school have to bring up little children and look after the old and have heavy economic burden.if the government tax on them,possibility of bad result may appear including no money to cure illness for the old or to go a good school for the children. Thirdly,economy develop slowly in China in recent years,The tourism industry as the third industry play an important role in GDP,Self-driving travelling will strengthen regional economy and then push forward China's economic development. It is common sense that driving car is inevitable to produce pollution towards the environment,but we can reduce the effectiveness of private car by other ways such as developing electrical car.So i suggest don't tax on private car owners for pollution.