错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但文中词汇表达丰富度不足;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Sam was got up on 6:00am on yesterday.Then he was ridding go to park,he was playing very happy.He and his pardents had lunch in the McDonald’s.At afternoon he was playing basketball with his classmates,from 4:00pm till 6:00pm.After dinner,Sam and his father went for a walk,and his father bought a classical CD to him.This was a funny day for Sam!