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Dear George, At first, welcome to China. Then the information about the household hotel as follows. About the price, 30 yuan per single room one day, and 20 yuan everyone per double room one day, which is the same with the meal charge. You have several choice to have lunch. One is that you can have lunch with the host, you can also order it with menu. At the same, some people choose to make it by themselves. In Summer, you can take a sea bathe, or swim in the pool. And also you can climb the mountains, you know China has many famous mountains. In addition, I think this kind of travelling you know about China, and feel the Chinese family atmosphere.