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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦165:说出你的烦恼

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:08浏览次数:1925
要求:
最近学校进行了“说出你的烦恼”的调查,请你用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.50%学生认为作业多、压力大;
2.30%的学生认为父母要求严、相互沟通少;
3.20%的学生认为活动少、体质差;
4.说说解决的方法和措施。
要求:
1.句子通顺,表达准确,可适当增加细节使内容连贯;

2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右


Our school has made a survey -----“Don’t keep your worries ”.Here are the results.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

用户的作文(系统评分49.5分
评语:

应增加文中从句的使用;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;作者词汇多样性不足,但能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,但单词拼写的检查要加强。

用户练习作文:

There are 50persent students thought that have too many workes, which made them have a lot of presures.that another 30persent convinced their parents are have a high requiret,and have a few communication between them.And also have 20%students think of the school's activity too less which made them had a poor physicals. In my onion,the school should reduce the workes ,and the parents should take care their kids more,the school life should add more activities in order to improve the children's health.

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