牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

如若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；结构较为严谨，文中衔接成分很少。

At the last week-end, I went to the zoo in Beijing. There were many people at the monkey area , giving monkey foods , playing with tiger, having fun with them. The animals were very kind to person. I think we should be kind to them ether. First we should keep clean , not throw garbage everywhere. Protecting the environment of the animal s is very important. Because , protecting animal is equal to protect our own.