语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文章能较灵活使用词汇,高级词汇有些少,还需注意个别拼写错误。
This advise is very useful for many people who want to leave something behind, prevent the great wall from graffiti. When I saw this article, I think it is not necessary for us to spent some money to leave somethind behind, at first, wast our money at all, at second, we need to protect the Great wall, why do you want to leave your mark, we have to know it is bad for it, the relevant department will give some good advise to protect it, but not built the fake wall to satify their desire leaving something behind. Because you will charge 120 USD if they want to leave mark, they will don't want to pay for it and leave mark freely when they don't see.