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This advice very useful for many people who want to leave something behind, prevent the great wall from graffiti. When I saw this article, I think it is unnecessary for us to spend some money to leave somethind behind, at first, waste our money at all, at second, we need to protect the Great wall from damage, why do you want to leave your mark, we have to know it is bad for it, the relevant department will give a good advice to protect it, but not to built the fake wall to satisfy their desire leaving something behind. Because they will charge 120 USD if they want to leave mark, they will not be willing to want to pay for it actively and leave mark freely when they don't see.