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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(93):游客可付费在仿造长城上涂写留言

发布时间:2015-04-30 10:28浏览次数:3965
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For about 120 dollars, visitors to China’s Great Wall can now leave their mark on a fake (仿造) wall built recently in the name of preventing graffiti (乱画) on the real structure.
The management office of the Juyongguan section of the Great Wall in Beijing built the fake wall and will charge 999 yuan for carvings on each brick, daily newspaper The First reported.
  With 9,999 bricks available, the marble structure could help management earn 9.9 million yuan. Juyongguan’s management said they were hoping to satisfy visitor’s desire to leave something behind—usually their name or words of love—while discouraging them form caving graffiti on China’s best-known cultural relic.
The Great Wall, which receives four million visitors a year, has suffered greatly from graffiti. But the project has come under some criticism with The First citing (引用) one expert as saying many schemes to ‘protect’ the wall are actually aimed at getting profits from the cultural treasure.
The fake wall is located near the most-visited section of the real wall in Badaling and visitors usually travel to Juyongguan on their way to Badaling.
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1.  以 约30个词概括短文的要点;
2.  以约120个词写一篇短文,就“游客可付费在仿造长城上涂写留言”这一事件发表你的看法,并包括如下要点:
1) 以你的实际或虚构的经历谈谈对某些人喜欢在旅游景点随便涂鸦留言的看法;
2) 对于专门修一段仿造城墙让游客付高价留言的做法你是赞成还是反对,并简要陈述你的理由。
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1.  可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.  标题自定,文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文章词汇表达丰富,不过请增加高级词汇的使用。

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This advice very useful for many people who want to leave something behind, prevent the great wall from graffiti. When I saw this article, I think it is unnecessary for us to spend some money to leave somethind behind, at first, waste our money at all, at second, we need to protect the Great wall from damage, why do you want to leave your mark, we have to know it is bad for it, the relevant department will give a good advice to protect it, but not to built the fake wall to satisfy their desire leaving something behind. Because they will charge 120 USD if they want to leave mark, they will not be willing to want to pay for it actively and leave mark freely when they don't see.

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