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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视。
Our school will plan to hold a spring outing on Friday, when we receive this good news and discuss it friendly with each other in our classroom, so there are a lot of opinions appear, such as climp mountain, go to amusement park, pick up rubbish and so on. So we decided to climp mountain in the morning, it is useful for us to hold this spring outing, we can absorb the flesh air and keep healthy, it is good for our body, then afternoon, we will pick up rubbish when we go down the moutain and throw it in the garbage can, it is very important for us to protect environment.
