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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36941
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富。

用户练习作文:

I have a lot of good friends in my daily life due to I'm fond of making a friend via variety way, such as surfing on line, chat on line via chatting software (for QQ, facebook, wechat etc...), friend introducing etc, but one friend of mine called Honey make me the best impression, usually we go shopping together in the supermarket and share a good news with each other, she works very hard for her job and spend some time to reading and studying her profession in order to further education and advance herself, because she will deal with a number of difficult cases in her job, for instance, meet her customer in their company and maintain business relationship with each other so that they can cooperation for a long time, so her pressure is very very large and it is very important and necessary for her to improve her professional capacity solving issues.

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