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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11033
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者用词生动多样,请继续努力,希望能更灵活地使用高级词汇。

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My favorite sport Playing football is my favorite sport in my spare time, I remembered that I loved to play the football by chance, when I went back to home and found that there was a football on the road, so I picked it up and took it to home with me, then we always played it with my good friends after classes every day, so I am deeply loving to play the football from then on. We offen take part in football match in our school, in order to improve our playing skills, we have to practice frequently on Sundays, as a matter of fact, we usually watch football matches via TV, my favorite football star is Beckham in United Kingdom, of course, I wish I could become a football athlete, meanwhile I have a biggest dream to become a professional football athlete in the world cup.

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