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My favorite sport Playing football is my favorite sport in my spare time, I remembered that I fell in love with it by chance, I found that there was a football on the road on my way home, so I picked it up and took it to home with me, then we always played it with my good friends after class every day, so I am deeply loving to play football from then on and football become a part of my life. We often take part in football match in our school, in order to improve our playing skills, we have to practice frequently on Sundays, as a matter of fact, we usually watch football matches via TV, my favorite football star is Beckham of United Kingdom, of course, I wish I could become a football athlete one day, meanwhile I have a greatest dream to become a professional football athlete in the world cup.