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语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，单词拼写更认真些。
Saving money We are student in the school, so it is most important for us to study hard in order to search a good job after we graduated, I think we need to save money due to we spend the money is from our parents, who worked very hard so that they can provide enough money to us and hope we can live a happy life in the school, it is necessary for us to save money and don't want to let our parents down. It is well-know that the unit cost of everything is very cheap relative to their goods price because the merchant would like to make more money when they run their shop, we have to find a good way to buy the item at the cheapest price with good quality, such as using coupones, looking for group-buy deals, etc. We need to improve our daily life and don't want to decrease the life level, therefore, to your suprised, you will buy the same type of good item at cheapest price once you open your brain to think. At the last, make money is very important for every one, but as a student, we need to study how to save money at the first in order to make more money in the future, which is good beginning when you graduated in the society.
