加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;文中高级词汇的使用比较灵活,但有个别拼写错误。
The Ice Age which is my favoriate movie. The movie is that animals against waste environment. Because the climate became warm, animals need to changed their living. Thus, they decided go to a new srrounding. The main roles are tiger、elepant and so on. They met a series of trouble things which are very dangerous. But they conquered them. I think that it is meaingful movies. Therefore, l like it very much!