初一英语作文模拟题:我最喜爱的电影

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The Ice Age which is my favoriate movie. The movie is that animals against waste environment. Because the climate became warm, animals need to changed their living. Thus, they decided to go to a new surrounding. The main roles is tiger、elephant and so on. They met a series of trouble things which is very dangerous. But they conquered them. I think that it is meaningful movies.