雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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I think there are both merits and demerits on traveling to other countries. First the remits are as follow. 1.easily have experience about different culture, and touching the local people, local foods, and local tradition. 2.get you relax, forget the stress from hard work, and get out of the working , daily pressure. 3. if you take a travel with your friends, you can get the relationship between yours deeply increasing your friendships. and if you travel with your lover, you can find something different with usual, if with your family you can acquire happy memorise not forget. Second, the demerits the most demerits of cause are spending lot money.