雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

作者词汇基础扎实；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

I think there are both merits and demerits on traveling to other countries. First the remits are as follows. 1.easily have experience about different culture, and touching the local persons, eating local foods, and local tradition. 2.take you relax, forget the stress from hard work, and get out of the working , daily pressure. 3. if you take a travel with your friends, you can get the relationship between yours deeply developing your friendship. and if you travel with your lover, you can find something different from usually, if with your family you can acquire happy memorise not forget. Second, the demerits the most demerits of cause are spending lot money.