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we have all kinds of delicious dumpling at Laosi Dumpling Hoes.here,the dumplings are big and nice,now we have tow great dumplings.special 1 has only vegetable and is just 2 yuan of 20,special 2 has beef and vegetalbe and is just 5 yuan for 20.welcome to our dumpling hoes.Our adress : 234 hoping avenue,our telephone:0373-2256.Thank you for coming!