作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
pen pal wanted I'm glad to you see the letter,my name is Lucy king,i'm from UK.i can speaking English.i want a pen pal in China.China is a beautiful country,i'm loving China very much.I like sports and listen to music.On the weekend , i often go to movies with my friends.i have a lovely cat, it's name Lili.it's so cute. please write and tell me about yourself