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our monitor our had a good monitor in our class four,grade one,his name is Zhangyong . his character as brave as his name.he is 13 years old,he looks very handsome and he like wearing black clothes,we like him that he is a good boy,he enjoys learing .everyday ,we are go home together that we are neighbour.