七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文中用词稍显贫乏，同时请注意单词拼写的检查；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam get up at six,clock yesterday morning, then he went to park read bicycle, he have a good time. he with his mather and father ate lunch in McDonald yesterday noon. Sam and his friend played ball in zhe school. Sam with his father went for a walk when them have had dinner, and his father bought a CD to him. Today is so intersting to Sam!