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GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

发布时间:2013-07-19 16:34浏览次数:8491
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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.  “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”

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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少。

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Dear buyer, Thank you for your message, for you mentioned issue, we have checked with our dealer and it is said that there are several versions for the same figure, so there are different months for the different versions, such as Japan version, agent version, Asian version, HK version and so on. So we hope you can understand. Meanwhile you don't need to worry about it too much if they can release this item in advance we will send to you ahead of schedule. Of course, we have been received your payment and have been reserving your order until we manage to send it to you. Please be waiting with patience, we will try our best to keep in touch with dealer and urge them all the time, and then we will fulfill your order promptly when we receive the goods and tell you the tracking number upon sending the package by the message and email. For other questions please contact us.

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