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Today I got up extremely early. It was a nice day, So I went jogging. After jogging, I had breakfast. Then I aided my mom with housework. I swept and moped the floor and washed dishes. After that, I prepared lunch together with my mom. In the afternoon, I spent 2 hours finishing my homework. The homework is so interesting that I did it well. I thought I was good for my health to do some exercise since I already sat here more than 2 hours. So I played table tennis with my friends. I got sweaty and took a bath. Then I had dinner. After dinner, it was still too early to go to bed. I just sat on a sofa and watched TV. I switched to my favorite channel. One of the most interesting movie was played. Until the movie was end, I went to bed. What a busy day today!
