七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；采用了一些简单的从句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam at six o'clock get up in yesterday, and then ride a bike get to park, he were in park played very happy. he with parents eating lunch in McDonald's at noon. Sam with him classmates play basketball in the afternoon, play from four o'clock until six o'clock in the afternoon. at dinnered end, Sam with farther go for a walk , farther bought a classical music cd gave his. Today is very funny in Sam!