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Tom's rules is a student, he get up at 6 o'clock and go to school at 6:15 o'clock everyday. Tom's rules is a good student, he don't eating outside. he is also don't listening to music on school days and don't watch TV on school nights. Tom's rules has be back home by 12:oo in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening everyday.