请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
Our Montor Our monitor is very great.He is a good boy.His name is Li Ming.He is ten years old.He has a big eye and a big nose.He is so beautiful. He often wears a red clothe and a red sweater,because he is like red.He likes to read, and often read in the library. This is our monitor and we like he.