请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
Our Montor Our monitor is very great. He is a good boy. His name is Li Ming. He is ten years old. He has a big eye and a big nose. He is so beautiful. He often wears a red clothe and a red sweater, because he is like red . He likes to read, and often read in the library. This is our monitor and we like he.