福建长汀四中2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中试卷英语作文附范文

文中词汇表达不够丰富，要多积累高级词汇；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

Our Montor Our monitor is very great. He is a good boy. His name is Li Ming. He is ten years old. He has a big eye and a big nose. He is so beautiful. He often wore a simple vest and a cylindrical, tasseled hat， because he is like red. He likes to read, and often read in the library. This is our monitor and we like he.