正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
Our Montor I am a student in NO,6 High School. I'm in Class 2, Grade 7. Our monitor is very great. He is a good boy. His name is Li Ming. He is ten years old. He has a big eye and a big nose. He is so beautiful. He often wore a simple vest and a cylindrical, tasseled hat, because he is like red. He likes to read, and often read in the library. This is our monitor and we like he.