福建长汀四中2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中试卷英语作文附范文

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Our Montor I am a student in NO6 Middle School. I'm in Class 12, Grade 8. Our monitor is very great. He is a good boy. His name is. He is ten years old. He has a big eye and a big nose. He is so beautiful. Li Ming is tall and strong. His hair is black and short. He often wore a simple vest and a cylindrical, tasseled hat. Now he is in a white coat, blue pants and a pair of brown shoes. He likes to read, and often read in the library. This is our monitor and we like he.