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作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Pen pal wanted Hello, My name is lucy King. I am 13 years old. I come from the UK, and I can speak English. My hobbies are sports, music and movies. I like China very much, and I want to learn knowledge about China. I hope to find a Chinese girl as my pen pal, and I can learn Chinese with she. It's better to have the same interests as me.
