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七年级英语下册Unit10 单元测试试卷作文附范文:My Busy Day

发布时间:2013-05-28 23:08浏览次数:1934
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以 "My Busy Day"为题描述你昨天的活动情况
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如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文中词汇表达不够丰富,但部分高级词汇用的比较灵活;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。

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Yesterday is my businest day in my life. Although it was Sunday, I had no time to relax because a lot of homework was going to be done.In the morning I had a self-study class to finish the rest of my homework and a Chinese lesson. I loved the Chinese lesson because it was very interesting. The Chinese teacher taught us how to appreciate ancient Chinese literature. And in the afternoon, I had two lessons too. My English teacher helped us with English.My English was very poor. His good pronounciation and fluent oral English enhanced my interest in English. Although it was busy yesterday, I had learnt a lot.

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