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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Hello, my name is Lucy King. I am 13 years old. I come from the UK. English is my mother tongue but I take interest in Chinese. I love China and want to know more about China. I am also willing to make a Chinese girl penfriend with same interests and hobbies. I like sports, movies and listen to pop music. Write back as soon as you receive my notices.
