七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨。

Sam got up at six in the morning yesterday. Afterwards, he rided to the park near his home and had a very good time there. At noon, he had lunch with his father at McDonald's. In the afternoon, sam played basketball with his classmates at school from 4 till six. After supper, he went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical music CD for him, so Sam is very excited. How interesting it was for Sam yesterday!