单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
hello, my name is Lucy King. I am a girl, I am 13 years old. I come from the UK. I speak English. my hobbies are: sports,music,movies. I want to look for pen pal wanted for China. Because i like china and want to know China. I hope to find a Chinese girl, and she better have same interest and hobbies, and I also want to learn from Chinese language.